montgom40

1. 基本上ok. 不過我可能會用habit 換掉 daily routine. routine 感覺有點一成不變, 例行公事, habit 感覺你有享受在其中.
2. Few days ago,I saw a report on the newspaper. It was about a Chinese young man who worked his way to college in American.
像這樣分成兩個完整的句子文法才對.
3. Because his parents were poor, he did a part-time job in an elementary school and finished his college studies all by himself.
4. I think most students in Taiwan are too dependent on their parents and lead a too comfortable life.
5. We should learn from this young man and try to be less dependent so that we can be mature.

備註:
lead a .... life: 過著...的生活
less dependent = more independent